Friday, January 23, 2009

Bus ride

Wrote this on the bus the other night... jus some thoughts




Nothing like a long busride to clear your head


I just hope the bus can make it back. lol


It keeps shutting down! You know if Nashville had an accesible public transportation system the city wouldnt be so bad. I miss the bus. Whenever you have a bad day just get on a bus and go somewhere you've never gone before. This actually feels like more familiar territory and it reminds me of home


I sure hope God made me this way for a reason.


I need to make a character for creatice writing anyway so here goes lets starts when the cons since they are oh so prevalent.


Con- stubborn, irrational


Ok thats the third time the bus shut down, I think Ive actually lived some of the craziness people only dream of. So back to what I was doing:


Cons

irrational

stubborn

mean

spiteful

selfish

intolerant

arrogant


Pros

giving

intelligent

joyful

independent

individual

charming

logical


Notice a trend here?

Many of these traits can be transcribed into a pro or a con, depending on the circumstance given that will be the side of the spectrum that is portrayed. So im a walking oxymoron!


Josh really has that stalker effect. It really would be better if he just left me! Not like end the relationship but just really leave when its time to leave, but he doesnt. So instead of driving away like a normal person, he is making it known that he's gonna follow me ALL the way home. He's parked across from the bus for goodness sakes!!!


He's the biggest advocate for relationship privacy but he is always being a sell-out and calling people when times get hard. You know how many times I could have called people? But I didnt cause Im not gonna drag others into my mess! Especially friends! People lose good friends like that.


The bus finally pulled off 9:26pm


Now he has me all paranoid scoping out every car that drives by...


I didnt know Antioch had a feminine definite article.

Wow alot of people ride the bus at night, I wonder if its due to the economy.


Ehh the truth of the story sounds so boring


Girl + Boy go to mall. Boy tells girl to find her own way home and storms off. Boy is remorseful, comes back, apoligizes and asks girl to be rational. Girl elects to take bus home instead of riding home with boy. Boy parks outside of bus and follows until girl reaches destination.


That doesnt make for the next best seller!


Im still in Murfreesboro somewhere 9:50pm


I can see the city I think we are almost there. Made it 10:05


The desolation of a nightfall struck Nashville is piercing. The only thing left to comfort are the flashing yellow and red of the streetlights and the chirp of the automated crosswalk bird.



1 comment:

Anonymous said...

He DID WHAT!
FRANKIE CAN I SAY SOMETHING? I KNOW IT'S YOUR SPACE BUT MANNNNN!
YOU GOT TO BE JOKING RIGHT?

I'M GONNA STIL CHILL FOR A MINIUTE WILL TALK WITH YOU SOON. YOU KNOW I'M JUST A PLANE RIDE AWAY RIGHT!