So this is my first blog ever thanks to Le and Maya who peer pressured me into logging, no excuse me, Blogging every thought, motion, and crevice of who I am. For starters I woke up this morning....jk guys.. But on a serious note I had my first creative writing class today so throughout the semester I will blog my works, this is the fuckery I came up with today, its terrible so brace yourself....
So here are the parameters:
Write a ten line poem using a commonly known proverb,
Alter and proverb and fit 5 of these random words in it,
Sounds peachy doesnt it?
Original "Never look a gift horse in the mouth"
Alteration : Never look a sold horse in the eye
Random ass words:
cloud
needle
lick
blackberry
voice
mother
whir
cliff
Never look a sold horse in the eye
I did once and it nearly broke my heart
The sound of his voice stirred more in me than you'd ever know
I was completely taken aback, lost in thought, vision clouded
I was approaching the cliff of sorrow
Filled with mother's voices trying to soothe the sobs of their nightmare stricken children
Nightmares as horrid as licking the point of a thousand needles...
So as you can see I didnt finish I ran outta time and it became extremely morbid... so idk
-Frankie
1 comment:
i honestly think it came out good for your choice of words not being as morbid as the poem concluded but it was a very good piece to read.. i want to take a creative writing class!!!!!!!!!!!! welcome to the blog world.. *Muah!*
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